2008-08-04

The English Diary

The other day I found a copy of the 1910 book Eibun nikki no hanashi (英文日記の話, "The English Diary"), which was written to help Japanese folks keep diaries in English as practice using the language. ("That the writing of the diary must be simple is the usual rule, but [...] the use of difficult 'Johnsonian words' in certain situations is not objectionable.")

Of course the main attraction is the selection of sample diary entries. Many different styles are explored. First up comes the straightforward and picturesque:

HARUO'S DIARY

Sunday, Jan. 1. Fine.

New Year's Day dawns bright and brilliant. Every house is trimmed with branches of pine and bamboo, and flags are flying everywhere. The scene of the streets is gay and peaceful. After taking "Zonimochi" I said "Omedeto" to parents and then went to school to attend the New Year's Ceremony. The Imperial Rescript was read and then the principal made a speech for the occasion, but it was so tedious that I could not help yawning. Spent the whole afternoon in flying kites with friends. Brother-in-law came and gave me two yen as a present. That made my purse very heavy.

Next we meet the stoic Umeo, who translates the -kun used for classmates as "Mr."

UMEO'S DIARY

Wednesday, Feb. 8. Cloudy.

Got up at 5. It was a cold morning and the water in the buckets was found frozen. It was hard for us to take a cold bath as usual. Had words with Mr. Fujino about the Japanese translation in the English class. Though our teacher stood by him yet my opinion seemed right. In the evening reviewed to-day's lesson. Went to bed at 10.

In March, we attend Hinako's psychedelic tea party:

HINAKO'S DIARY

Friday, Mar. 3. Fine.

It being the Girl's Festival Day to-day, I was very busy assisting mamma in cooking "Gochiso" for dolls. Went to Momo-chan's and looked at her dolls. They are all pretty. In the evening invited many friends and gave a great feast. Momo-chan tasted just a spoonful of shirozake and crimsoned to the roots of her hair. "You are like a Kintoki," laughed my mamma heartily. How happy we were! Beautiful dolls! Crimson blankets! Gold lacquered furniture! All were reflected by the brilliantly lighted candles and made us dazzling. I wish the Festival would come more often.

In May, we meet the Godfather:

A BUSINESSMAN'S DIARY

Friday, May 5. Fine.

A fire occurred at Nishiki-cho, Kanda and fifty houses were reduced to ashes. My two rented houses were also burned down. But as the houses were covered by an insurance of ten thousand yen, the net loss I sustained is two thousand yen. Presented each tenant with a sum of money as a present of sympathy.

And then in August, the book blindsides us with incredible tragedy:

TSUKIO'S DIARY

Thursday, Aug. 4. Rained in the evening.

Called at Mr. Kanzaki's in the afternoon and had a pleasant chat with him about English. As we are bosom friends the time sped in our chat without our being aware of it. Startled at the clock striking nine I took leave of him. The sky was pitchdark and rain began to fall. This gloomy aspect suddenly reminded me of my beloved sister, which sent a chill through me. No sooner had I entered the porch than brother rushed out and said, with tears in his eyes, "Brother, sister is at death's door!" Rushed I into sister's bed-room and found the doctor with a syringe in his hand feeling her pulse. I approached her pillow and asked her, "How do you feel?" "I feel like dying!" she faintly said. "Nonsense," I cried, "cheer up!" The injection apparently took effect, and she fell into a slumber. "When I am cured...." she murmured in a dream. At this mother buried her face in her sleeves. As for me it was hard to suppress my tears. Silence reigned in the room. Sometimes she awoke and tried to speak, but her spirits were too low to do so. When she was on the point of breathing her last she opened her eyes wide and said, "Brother! Thank you for your kindness. Mother! I, I........" With these words she left this World of Misery for Heaven. It was 3 a.m. on the 5th. She was seventeen years of age...... For the rest I have no no courage to describe....

I particularly admire that he had the strength of will to note the weather at the beginning of the entry.

Popularity factor: 12

無名酒:

Noting the weather at the opening of an entry as convention goes back to the Heian Period. Why! In fact, one particular Fujiwara Regent had people noting the weather for him. (That is to say, at least one did that got remarked upon in a study of courtly diaries.)

However, in recopying diaries, sometimes people left the weather out. Boo.


Leonardo Boiko:

Having the weather data available makes it possible to compile all sorts of meaningless correlations. Do kitsune possessions increase with bad weather? Tanka writing with rainy days? Flower-viewing entries with wind?


Leonardo Boiko:

Now I’m inclined to keep a Japanese diary once my Japanese improves enough. With weather, of course.

Also: what are Johnsonian words? :)


Anonymous:

What a diary lover we are! In the Summer break, elementary school kids have to keep a drawing diary (e-nikki) for the whole summer.
The diary book has as many entries as the summer holidays. For 6 years, I endured!The first couple of days are OK but pretty soon entries begin to contain just weather and drawings of the sun and cicadas and other bugs. Missing entries of days start to appear.
I think I completely stopped writing in the first year.


Charles:

I had to research dates for the obvious comparison to Ishikawa's "Romaji Diary," and indeed, it dates to 1909, a year before this Eibun Nikki.


Carl:

@Leonardo Boiko,

"Johnsonian" refers to Samuel Johnson (1709–1784), the famous writer of "A Dictionary of the English Language" and a general man of letters.


language hat:

Johnsonian words.


Matt:

Thanks for covering the Johnson issue, you two.

MMS: I'd noticed it before but I didn't realize it went that far back! I checked my Tosa Nikki just now and that has dates but no weather, so I suppose the practice must have taken hold sometime around the turn of the millennium.

Anonymous: I understand that a lot of those e-nikkis are filled in all at once on the last evening before school comes back in...

Leonardo: I definitely recommend keeping a Japanese diary -- a handwritten one. It's one way to make sure you get at least a little practice writing Japanese every day (which means you can develop an actual, consistent, individual hand in Japanese, which you really can't do drilling rows of identical kanji).

Charles: You just reminded me of when I would tell students to write something in English and they'd just write Japanese in Romaji.


無名酒:

Basically, of all the things called 日記 (which could be just a list of documents filed by date), the 漢文日記 written on 具注暦 pretty much follow that pattern. I can't remember if 官職日記 like 外記日記 include weather, but that's a possibility. There might be some original copies without weather notations (I think the earliest manuscript, as opposed to copy, is from 御堂関白記), but that's almost the archetypical form.

Where it came from, I haven't been able to pin down. Tosa nikki doesn't read like many calendric nikki (neither does Murasaki Shikibu's, at least in part), and I'm not sure that they were really based on the same model, pace Ki no Tsurayuki's cross-dressing introduction.

Contemporaneous to Ki no Tsurayuki is Fujiwara no Tadahira's 貞信公記, but that mostly survives in a highly abbreviated form. I've been through it, but I don't remember if there's any weather notes.... By 小右記, definitely, they are there.

(What I should do is check if there's a Chinese precedent. But.)

The weather included tends to be related to precipitation (晴、陰/曇--which in practice means "looks like rain" or heavy cloud cover--, 雨降, 吹雪 and the like), and not to hot and cold except in rare exceptions. (And even then, the exceptions I can think of other than Teika's are in the body of the entry, as opposed to in the opening.) To this respect, it seems like weather is like noting wether the day is 仏滅 or the like--as some court procedures varied on whether it was fair or rainy, that might be the origin.

But that's just a personal theory.


Charles:

Ah, my memory (and research) is faulty. I mis-recollected that Ishikawa wrote his diary in English, but it was actually written in Japanese in romaji. Mea Culpa. But your anecdote was amusing.


Matt:

Didn't he write it in English as a kind of code? Or substitution cypher, technically. Worst one ever, too.

MMS, as ever I appreciate the info. I had never even considered that the weather-noting might have had a practical function.


cee:

There's about one passage of English in Romaji Diary: the rest (bar names of days of the week) is just Japanese in romaji. He sort of suggests he's writing in romaji so his wife can't read it, but -- yeah, worst substitution cypher ever.

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