Maybe? That sounds almost livejournalish.

~~The Blackest Sun~~by Matt No-Sword~

I log on from a computer in the lobby,Why do my commenters against me ... lobby?A thousand dogs besiege my heartAnd no-one thinks my piercing's art

Now THAT'S LiveJournalish!

Yeah, I'm briefly travelling with the folks and I didn't know (until just now) that this place we're staying had internet-accessible computers.

Extra points for using an icon that looks like you're reading the poetry aloud. ;)